Sean gripped my hand as we waited for the doctor. I shivered in the chilly room. The door swung open and Dr. Walters strolled in. I tried to read the expression on his face.
"Is it what we thought?" Sean asked, squeezing my hand tighter.
I inhaled.
"Yes," the doctor answered, "you're having a boy."
OoOo!
ReplyDeleteI like how even in this small little blurb, you got so much emotion across.
Nice! Thanks for sharing!
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You wrote a little that enabled me to imagine a lot. Great little blurb--thanks for sharing :)
ReplyDeleteIsn't amazing how clever we feel when we find out we are having a baby? A few words, yes, but great feeling.
ReplyDeleteUltra-sound post!
ReplyDeletethat is the greatest yes in the world
ReplyDeleteI remember that yes myself and still get giddy. Thanks for reminding how great a yes it was!
ReplyDeleteVery dramatic, filled with suspense. Nicely written, well done.
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Awesome Catherine!
ReplyDeleteStan, great play on words. :)
ReplyDeleteHeartsjoy, I know and he still makes me giddy.
Geoff, Americanising Desi, and Natalie, thank you.
Little writing, big results. I like it :)
ReplyDeleteYour Scribbling made me smile! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteVoidwalker and Mary Anne, thank you. :)
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Kristin, Thank you so much!!
ReplyDeleteI remember sitting a waiting room just like the one you mentioned. Thanks!
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